I wanted to put down a kossith OC on the paper for 3 reasons.
First; I wanna say that this guy has been in my head since I played DA2.
Second; I am not a good writer, so there might be mostly just for show.
Third; I wanted to show a different
face than what we are used to in the DA2 game. This is mainly for conceptual ideas. Faces and bodies so to speak.
Okey here is the bio: 
Name: Tal

Race: Kossith
Age: 35
Origin: Sehèron
Hight: 2. 40 meter
Religion: He is in for the Tal' Vashoth.
Appearance:
He looks very intimidating in his face. Despite that he is only 35 years old, he looks at least ten years older. Has one broken horns on his left side of his head.
Otherwise the horns are middle sized, between Arishok's and the soldiers from the game kinda size.
Wears a shoulder pad on his right arm, the Kossith leather pants with addition of a custom made stomach protector.
Has his special boots which he made a small enhancement after finding some steel on few random Fex warriors, laying around. Dead.
Otherwise he have his glove and a leather arm wrist thingy.
I'll edit this later
EditAbout the story, I had really hard time to do something about it, so I will get back to that later:/
That axe looks dangerous but I'll trust him with it XD
I can see you're a master of the pencil ^_~ Your shading & proportions in this are.. wow!